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All Comments on 'The Best and Worst Birthday'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great story. Talk about turnabout being fair play. Thanks for sharing it and would love to see how they ring in Reed's Birthday.

SouthPacificSouthPacificover 9 years ago
Really enjoyed it, BUT...

Please get someone else to proof-read before you submit! It doesn't really need any editing as such, but the myriad typos were a big distraction from a really good story.

biercebierceover 9 years ago
A sweet love story

Very warm and heart felt. Thanks

PileDriver48PileDriver48over 7 years ago
Some guys have all the luck

Fun story, good guy gets the girl, jerk gets his due, and I got a warm feeling all over.

*****

Thanks

ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn57almost 3 years ago

Beautifully written, so full of compassion and more than a little hot. Great job.

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Hmm. How do I describe me....Well, I'm after experiences that make me smile. Whether it's something I've written or a chat room conversation I try my best to walk away with a all those lovely, bubbly feelings. I think that too often there's a dark, mellow dramatic overtone wit...