by EenViezeVent
Let them have a few threeways first then let mom and Steph decide who gets pregnant . Five stars
The virus overrides the pill,did I read this story before and the mom called other patients to check up on them
I think it should be a three way and as a result of their sexual encounters both mom and sister get pregnant.
Please keep this awesome story going for a few more chapters if you can. It's awesome.
Well written. Enjoyed reading it. Waiting for part 3. Thanks 5 stars
I think it would be good to have mom catch them in the shower and then Steph tells mom she saw them yesterday and her true feelings about her brother. Matt can remind his mom that he told her she was one of two people he loved and that Steph is the other, then they all agree that none of them can stop what has happened and all of them need to continue. Just my thoughts. As for your question, I think another poster said something about the virus over riding the pill so Steph gets pregnet anyway. Mom can't get pregnet because you said in chapter one that she got fixed after he was born. Whatever you decide, please continue this story.
Great second chapter! But to answer your question, no, don’t add impregnation yet. Wait until chapter 4 or 5 adding that demographic this early would kill the story, though it wouldn’t hurt to tease the characters with it lol. but flesh out the story some more add more character development and what’s going on with this mysterious virus, maybe even cure it, I don’t know you’re the author here not me lol, it would be awesome to see a three way like a previous comment said. Keep up the good work!!
No impregnating please. Good story though. Especially chapter one.
Hi all, thanks for all the comments and ratings!
First off, the story is going to be a four parter, so chapter three will be the last one. I think it will be good like that, also my time to write will be limited a lot in the next few months due to work. Don't worry I think I'm doing a good job so far with an satisfying end.
Second, I decided that there will be impregnation. And again, don't worry, it won't happen in some kind óf strange way. The characters have decided to do it after a lot of talking and building their relationships.
I'm almost at 10.000 words already so I think it will be even longer than this chapter, just how I like my ending chapters.
In the meantime, why not check out some of my new uploaded Illustrated stories? I have submitted two new ones based around Incest, they also take place in the same universe as TBCIL.
So, look forward to chapter three!
AWESOME! I'd say more, but, I shoot my wad over chapter 1! I was happy to see it wasn't just the virus between Matt and Stephanie.
Honestly at first Steph seemed like an immature older sister type,but then after Matt collapsed her defenses just broke in that instant and she revealed the pure,innnocent,vulnerable Steph to Matt,she seen he was in pain and her love and compassion came out.That right there told me and other readers that Steph loved Matt with everything she had.
And to find out Steph was still a virgin and kept it all those years only for Matt was beyond words monumental.But at the end Mom walked into the house and yelled "Kids,I'm Home" and then it ended,so cliffhanger there.
Now I am not sure what will happen with Chapter 3 but since Matt and Steph know now that The Virus doesn't just effect Males but also Females by raising their horniness and pussy juice amount,and what Steph said to Matt about she wouldn't mind if Matt got her pregnant,so could the virus counteract the job that birth control pills work to prevent.Truthfully I wish the virus does and both Mom and Steph can have Matts babies in the next chapter.
Also they keep making references to Dad,could he play a role in the next chapter also as to how and why he died and they learn some kind of truth?.I hope so.