by EnglishMuffins
Chapter 2 as well as a redux rewrite are available for your reading pleasure
nteresting premise.
Sex does move along too fast. Not a hint of reluctance. Not enough description of prior incident. How did her pussy look to him? Taste to him? Did he tease her pussy in the restaurant. Did she like it? Did he like it? Did she tease his cock? Did she keep him on the edge or just stop before she orgasmed?
Four stars.