All Comments on 'The Best Date, Bar None Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Now for ch 2.

EnglishMuffinsEnglishMuffinsover 9 years agoAuthor
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Chapter 2 as well as a redux rewrite are available for your reading pleasure

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nteresting premise.

Sex does move along too fast. Not a hint of reluctance. Not enough description of prior incident. How did her pussy look to him? Taste to him? Did he tease her pussy in the restaurant. Did she like it? Did he like it? Did she tease his cock? Did she keep him on the edge or just stop before she orgasmed?

Four stars.

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