by IceBottom
Try writing from a first or third person perspective. You'll win more votes.
I never get past the first few lines of a second person story.
I wasn't there and cannot pretend I was.
Furthermore, half of your audience are likely wearing the wrong kind of plumbing.
I went for a massage to relieve stress and when asked if I wanted a happy ending I said yes because I didn't really know what it meant. I was shocked when his fingers started touching my pussy but it felt good so I opened my legs wide. I was very wet and he inserted two fingers and rubbed my clit with his thumb. His other hand played with my nipples. I had the best orgasm ever. Now I visit him once a month for my happy ending.