All Comments on 'The Best of Friends'

I wish I could write as well as you do. A very realistic telling of your tale. 5 stars..

Do you realise how few times Eileen speaks? It's not enough - we know her body but not her mind.

Started reading and realized story was being told without dialog.

Scanned page 1, finding almost no dialog/quotation marks.

Abandoned the story.

Paul in Oklahoma

Dialogue

I too missed the dialogue, but I dont know how much more it would have added or could have added to this story.

A very well written story. This story was being told to a person by a person, so there would not have been any dialogue form the three characters.

I liked this story very much, thank you for sharing. 5/5 stars.

Really good; not great. There was an expectation on my part of three together at the same time. But, not interested in oral sex with vaseline.

An excellent story. Rarely has the balance of power and attraction between the players in a threesome been described so well.

Wonderfully written, except for an occasional hiccup…and one can overlook those. Very erotic but not coarse.

Dialogue? The author uses a convention often used by Joseph Conrad. That is, the narrator introducing another speaker who’s story is relaid to and then through the original narrator. This technique does away with first person accounts, e.g. dialogue and the boring “I did this then I did that”.

Hope I’m right about that! Anyway, well done.

Great story, but the pronoun errors are disappointing.

This didn’t evoke my usual aversion to cuck stories but it still was one. I just can’t get over wife sharing. A perverted relationship.

Bill S.

Profoundly human

umm, well written for what it is,,