All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 02'

Damn it you cant keep teasing me like this!!!!

holy hell i need updates to this. i'm obsessed with this story and PLEASE give me more chapters

What about the promised spanking? I think that would fit in.

But I think, you're going for the choke-thing. Just try writing it, like you would feel it yourself. All the thoughts a sub could have while that, as well as any physical reaction. We're talking about a ftm right? So just describe what could happen.

And don't make Alan push it to the edge right at the beginning. Let him play with his sub, make Ray struggle a little.

I know you can do that. You've already proven in the first part. ;)

This is so good in so many ways. Please continue.