All Comments on 'The Big Dick Club Pt. 02'

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cadeauxxxcadeauxxxabout 6 years ago
Lovely work

Nicely done. I love seeing Kim there, as she is one of my favorites and you certainly did her justice. Can't wait to see what else you have coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
loved it

great story only negative comment i can give comes in the form of constructive criticism. can i suggest using asterisk's

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this might work to separate some parts of the story as you move between characters.

loved the story though cant wait for the next instalment,would love to see Karen Gillan in a future episode.

tomjordan945tomjordan945about 6 years agoAuthor

That's a good idea. I do switch between two stories a lot so makes sense to separate them.

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