by RibaldWriter
The sex scenes were great, and as the story progresses it’s even blossoming into Romance. But profession of love after a few days of meeting!!!
But my guess is that you never cracked a couple of ribs, or you have a hell of a high pain tolerance.
i enjoy the premise, but whole "I love you!" after less then 24 hours is just absurd and breaks me out of the story. Why not take the time to develop the characters and emotions rather than just jumping to the end?
I really enjoyed this story!! Keep them coming!!