All Comments on 'The Big Kick'

by netdog

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Soooo Hot!

Fantastic! I liked the set-up to the actual event, so like my own experiences (but I haven't had the opportunity yet to take it all the way). Great writing and very realistic. Keep up the good work.

sinsational83sinsational83almost 9 years ago
pretty good

The only thing I will say bad about this short story is that it should have been a long story. I ( and I guess ) anyone else who reads this would like for you to elaborate more on this story. good story even though it is so damn short add to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I like this story very much, gave it a 5- (approx. 93%)

The scenario is simple but netdog crafted the story line very very well.

I wish all of this happened to me.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
A VERY, VERY OPEN RELATIONSHIP

with all the roles and role playing fetishes, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
PAUL REVERE AND THE RAIDERS WERE CORRECT

seems like all those kicks getting harder to find, TK U MLJ LV NV

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Voyeur husband and cuckold are redundant.

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 years ago

I loved this story as it hit "close to home". Our Bedroom was just off the Living Room. One day I found that I placed a Mirror next to the closet door that I could sit in the closet and see most of the living room Sofa. My Wife had some guy deliver something and I could see them very clearly fucking just a few feet away. 5 stars to the writer for a "Hot" memory and Fantasy Story.

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