All Comments on 'The Bike Ride'

I origanally wrote this for the friend in my story, We do flirt, but hasn't came to this! Note: this was ment for her. I'm sorry for not cleaning this story , before I submitted it, I could have you a little more detail on some of the sex acts, I notice that they crash together..instead of flowing. And I could have had alot better paragraphs, to separate the sceens. After reading some of the storys here, I realize I have work to do.

Hey Doc I enjoyed this. Don't worry the more stories you right the better you'll get. You've already done the hard part. You wrote something and posted it. That's more than most do. I know you've posted another story. That makes two. That's alot more than most people do. Keep it up.