All Comments on 'The Bike Shop'

Decent people with a good outlook and great plans.

A great story.

Thankyou

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Don't let it end here. More, PLEASE!!

Thoroughly enjoyed this "feel good" submission. Obviously this. Story could be continued. In 2 pages you strongly developed 4 characters plus you have the sister land her boyfriend to work with if you choose. I vote you go forward OR start la new one and carry it further.

Ed

liked it but felt rushed with the way they got together so fast.then the somewhat 4way with the sister and her boyfriend was kind of weird.why could he not go to school there at home if his sister is doing it then they could keep the shop?

A bit inconsistent in describing her, first he says she has a bigger chest than he expected, then says she has small breasts, then says she is flat chested.

Also wondering, why not a local school?

But again à verry open ending , you could go on with another chapter.

Great story, but I doubt we will see a second chapter any time soon as it has been years since this was published. Well done. 5 stars.

Enjoyed immensely quirky and fun