All Comments on 'The Birds and the Bees Pt. 01'

A despicable and disgusting father.

An ignorant and stupid son.

A brainless, slutty girlfriend.

There is everything to make a bestseller story.

I don’t like the trend of these questions coming from a father to his son.

I see, Your brain hasn't developed at all even after 16 years

get real, at least a little bit

Okay, yeah - it's dumb.

I just cannot imagine a father having with his son part of this conversation AFTER said son moved in with his girlfriend. Just doesn't make sense - this is the kind of talk about women you have with your boys when they start dating, not when they live with someone!

The old man ain't wrong, though - if you don't give it your all in the sheet, she'll start looking elsewhere for what she needs. Then again, it doesn't seems like pop raised his boy properly - again, this is the kind of shit-talking you should have with your teenager, not your grown child.

So yeah... fully expecting this to end with the old man stealing his son's girlfriend. The presentation may be new (although I'll improbable), but there's a whole lot of stories just like this one around here.

No score since it's not done... even though its ending is quite predictable.

Geeze… what kinda fucked up dad talks about his sons gal like that, but he is right she will get bored of him soon..

Dad is an asshole. The kid should record this and play it for his mom. Then he would see who bosses who around.

I guess you did not get any positive feed back so far. Finish it and we'll see....

wall of dialogue, with a 'dad' talking like some hipster wanna-be-cool incel, trying to decide how to write dialogue he couldn't possibly comprehend.