All Comments on 'The Birthday Adventure'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yet another faggots mind excrement.

Why don't those sickos commit sepuku??

fakers51fakers51about 19 years ago
An erotic story

What a way to blee the man you love. To Even think of taking him on this trip was a great adventure. Maybe in her bi-sexual way she wanted to also taste and fuck some strange pussy and this became a good excuse to make this happen.

GoldeniangelGoldeniangelabout 19 years ago
holy fuck

goddamn you bitch... that was the last story of yours that i hadn't read...

MORE! MORE!!!!!!!

i need to watch Lword... lol. or something...

you're such a hottie.

*HUGS*

j

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Great B-Day

I enjoyed the hell out of this story and will be checking out the rest of you stories.

BD

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUover 19 years ago
b-day gifts!

WOW.... is this my next b-day gift.... and i thought the year i got my first double BJ was a great year! :)

love and kisses,

Hubby

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Steamy work!

Very enjoyable! I got quite stiff reading it. However, there is one point. Spit does not usually suffice for anal lube. Believe me, I know at least one woman who complained that her ex used only spit, and that it hurt very badly. Anal is great, but use lube! Anyway, however, it was still a great story about threesome- very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
happy birthday

WELL DONE! FANTASTIC JOB! LOOK FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE.

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
What a wonderful birthday!!!

So does he get to make something that will remind him of birthdays to cum (or is that come)? Maybe Stephanie needs to join him and Terri in a continuously living 3-some?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hot

hot story, love the graffic details very well structured and written

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot and Short

This is a hot and short story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
a true loving wife

nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesomely done!

Bravo....very real story I could see myself there, looking at the birthday cake with this hot blond, Stephanie wrapped around it.

Love the graffic nature of the language you used. You also did a good job with grammar and syntax.

I saw that this is your 1st posting here at Literotica,

hope we'll see more stories from you soon!

Anonymous
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