All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift'

by StraightRazor62

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ErotonautErotonautalmost 16 years ago
Sharp and sexy

Terrific debut, with a great build-up. Can't wait to see what you come up with next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Brilliant

What a first story - you've set yourself a high target if you write a follow up - please do. Brilliant doesn't do it justice !

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