All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift'

Fabulous WRITING! So beautiful - you brought the love and lust totally to life!!!

Superbly written!..The interaction between uncle and niece draws you right in to the drama and the dialouge is exceptional.

Keep up the good work and hope to read more of your work very soon.

Would vote 10 stars if at all possible!

If only every girl could have a first time like that.

You so beautifully portrayed. Bravo!

I've been regularly coming to this website for well over two years, this story is without doubt the best I've ever read! I hope you'll eventually write a sequel to this amazingly written tale.

The way you built up to the sex part, and also the way you vividly described their lovemaking took my breath away.

I hope ypu will continue with them. Your writting is very good. thanks for charing the story with us.

The fact that this is a debut story is made all the more remarkable by the superior quality of the author's ability to build up emotions and sexual tensions to the brilliant climax. I believe it will be difficult for the author to equal or better this story but, if he does, he deserves all the plaudits due to him. More, please!

Thanks everyone, for your kind comments. I have noted the requests, and am working on a sequel. Meanwhile, I recently posted another story. If anyone is interested, it is called "The Ugly Duckling Becomes A Swan." I don't know how to add a link here, so I guess you would have to search for it if you want to read it. Thanks again, R.LeBeaux (my pen name under which I write novels, the most recent of which is entitled Barbara. If you are interested, you can find it on Amazon by searching "Barbara by R. LeBeaux".

An amazing journey for both people ...

Good story.

Obviously written by a woman. No man could come that frequently, that close together. However, extremely exciting to read. i very much enjoyed it.

Excellent story

She made it easy by her insistent encouragement.

This account could hold its place in at least 4 Categories,

Mature, Incest/ Taboo, Erotic couplings and First time.

But it is a tender story of love and eroticicm.

5 stars at least.

Love it!

If she had allowed him more control it have hurt less.