All Comments on 'The Birthday Gift'

by Polecat25

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
No Comments, So I Will

If it is his 40th birthday, and she is 10 years younger (30) than he, and they have been married for 5 years, then, voila, she was 25 when they married, not 20. If you can't add or subtract, then don't use numbers in your story!!!

Polecat25Polecat25over 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks. Somehow I missed that.

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