All Comments on 'The Birthday Party'

It was so life like it was like it was almost happening. I got lost in the story and my mind filled in all the colors, smells and my heart reflected the eroticism of the story. The flow was so smooth and the attention to detail was unlike any I've read before. Miss Rule obviously spent some time in the thinking and writing of this and it showed in the quality of the story. I've read her other story and it cause me to lose control of myself and take things in hand but I wished I had waited to do it to this story. It was GREAT. Keep on writing. "Greg" is a lucky man. Sho.

Too predictable overall