All Comments on 'The Birthday Present'

hot stuff, keep writing more of it.

Great story.

I hope there are going to be more

of their adventures.

Great story! Loved it! Hope you do more, that one got me really hot!

Your description on your page sounds beautiful. How about a pic? ;-)

That was an amazing story! Great details, I love it!

-Always been my fantasy too! (Another woman and my boy)

Damn, that story made me cum hard.

The whole story was hot, but when Loren rimmed Emily, I thought I was going to loose it.

Loved the story. I love to eat pussy and lick the ass too. You trying anal for the first time and having your ass licked sent me over the top. keep the stories coming. especially the true ones. how about a pic too.

mmmm this story was wonderful my mistress. You are so powerful with your words mmm i came instally while reading it mmm damn.

Holy Shit!!!!!!!!!

Looking forward to reading more then!!!!!!!

a lot of parts n your story didnt even make sense or go along with the story.. you need to look over your work it was poorly done.

This story was amazingly hot! The last guy didn't know jack!