All Comments on 'The Birthday Present'

I am interested in seeing where this will go. Do not mind the nonnies as they are jerks.

I have not read this genre before, but what a great introduction!! I was saddened to see no second part. Can't wait for the next installment!!

Hoping for another page or two?

I am a fan, but grammar. (Ex. two != toe.)

I would love to hear how Mistress Sophia trains her new pig!