All Comments on 'The Bitch Ch. 01'

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Rudy JamesRudy Jamesover 19 years ago
A good start

Well written start of a story that can go in different directions. A pity that it is not edited all that well...But who cares, as long as the storyline stays captivating and the characters develop nicely. Hopping to part 2 now...

Heels LoverHeels Loverover 16 years ago
So Hot!

Sexy, arousing, dirty, two hot beautiful women... a great story that had me wanting more as soon as I finished it! Yes, the grammar & punctuation could be better, but the images you created here are amazing!

LITTLECUB86LITTLECUB86over 12 years ago
PLEASE READ

ADD MORE OR START ANOTHER STORY THIS ONE IS GREAT. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS SO FAR. I WONDER WHEN THERE WILL BE MORE, IT GOT MY BODY ALL EXCITED.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Unpleasant character

What a nasty, rude, spoiled brat. I hope she evolves into a nicer person in the rest if the story. Yuck.

FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 9 years ago
Incredible!

I rarely give 5 stars but this was well deserved!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yum yum

Teacher/student stories are sinfully delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
10 lines in

Honestly, when there's a mistake that early, I cringe. Sorry. Get a proofreader,

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Im not in a kind of knowledge connected to a teacher student encounter in a classroom, but knowing some about the puritanical art of living the us is into, ms. Santos is definitely risk her job and some more ...... Yeah i know its just a dream like tale, BUT you get it or ...... Its a nice bitchi plot after all

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