All Comments on 'The Black Rooster Resort Ch. 02'

by eeric

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Zephyr33Zephyr33over 7 years ago
Not quite there

This universe is great and I hope you stick with it. In this chapter, you're nibbling around the edges but not quite hitting the spot. We aren't getting enough of any of the relationships for it to really be "hard hitting" content.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
excellent, so hot

i love the allusions to interracial sex in media. you are doing an awesome job. thank you!

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