All Comments on 'The Blackmailers Fall Ch. 03'

There will come a time when Joe gets tired of the revenge. I would hate to be there when that happens. I would suspect quadruple murder suicide is in their future. Eventually all people break and he is going to one day. When? Who knows. But it will happen and heaven help all of them.

You're spot on in terms of one path. To my mind it would be Alice and Donna getting tired of Joe and booting him out as soon as all the assets were converted over.

That's too dry and technical an ending so I just stopped it where I did.

Besides it allows the reader to fill in an ending...

I didn't want the story to head into a Master/Slave situation - and glad that you caught that.

I can see a twist here. No sooner than Dan and Robert leave, than Alice removes Joe's cock cage and then it's their turn on the bed. Joe's not a blackmailer, neither is Alice. They're making video's to sell to an adult book store. keeping copies for themselves. The falling box in the closet wasn't an accident. it was on purpose, Alice is really that kinky and Donna knows all about it. the only one's that really don't know are Dan and Robert. Surprise, Every room in the Motel has a hidden carmera. It's what they do.