All Comments on 'The Blackout'

This isn't even a story - someone has lost it !

Please. I found your story to be awesome.

That was beautifully written and so well paced and it certainly made me feel an enormous build up of erotic energy, just what a good story should do. Alison xxx

I greatly enjoyed your story. It really was one of the best I've read this year. And I'm looking forward to the continuing story. Please keep writing.

Love it! Girl/Girl sex is great and even better when a younger woman teaches an older one, the mother/daughter thing saw it comming, so now is it a threeway?

I think on the first page you said Julie when Julie wasn't involved you meant piper by far this is a really hot story need more from you looooove it

A well written journey with an enticing mixture of guilt and lust. A

story that provokes a fun range of emotions, each of which are nicely designed to keep the reader wet. An enjoyable flight that I hope continues.

Emersonchristie is an excellent writer!

Such a wonderfully written story by such an exceptional author. Almost 4 years later, I still love her first submitted work, Memoirs of a Bordello. It remains in my Top 10 favs. However, I'm not fond of the subject matter she has chosen to write here (Incest/Taboo) or her latest submission, after 3 years, A Wife's Turn ("Loving Coupling"). Despite these difference, I still find EmersonChristie to be one of the top newer writers on Literotica and I look forward to the continuation of the Bordello series and other Lesbian works.

Ok you write that the mom and piper love each other and don't wanna lose each other except you have to piper all gung ho for the mom and daughter to have sex it seems a little off it doesn't seem like something someone who's supposed to be in love with a person would do there is always going to be some jealousy involved like there was when the mom caught piper kissing her daughter so willingly cheating on the mom even if it was just a kiss which is a issue with young people they don't know what love is which is why piper was willingly to cheat on the mom even in a kiss forum which is why she was so quick too get the mom to fuck her daughter that way she would feel justified to cheat when ever she wants you shouldn't speak about love between characters when it's clear 1 doesn't know what the word means and the fact the mom didn't fight too much like she could and should have says she doesn't really know what real love is either outside of family oriented stuff not romantic love