All Comments on 'The Blossoming'

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kathy2b46kathy2b46about 12 years ago
oh yes

just think of taking a black cock like that yumme

janeyljaneylabout 12 years ago
Really reminded me...

of a similar fantasy I had from a young age for a very long time in various guises. Up to your usual standard. Well written, dialogue and narrative. Both well paced, believable and a joy to read. The sex is filthy and arousing...hot as hell...just fabulous...xx

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaabout 12 years ago
OMG!

I don't know which of those women I want to be more.............

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I too had a similar fantasy. Good story but could have more natural dialouge and could be better organized and with better punctuation. I enjoyed though indeed.

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.