by geronimo_appleby
of a similar fantasy I had from a young age for a very long time in various guises. Up to your usual standard. Well written, dialogue and narrative. Both well paced, believable and a joy to read. The sex is filthy and arousing...hot as hell...just fabulous...xx
I too had a similar fantasy. Good story but could have more natural dialouge and could be better organized and with better punctuation. I enjoyed though indeed.