All Comments on 'The Blue Life Ch. 34: Tucking In'

Good to hear from you again.

Thank you. Chapter 35 is finished, and just needs to be proofed. It should be up soon. I am starting work on Chapter 36. After that, there are all sorts of loose threads and plot twists I have in mind. But the doors are open to all sorts of possibilities. Any suggestions?

Another great story I may have some suggestions will have to see where You take the story with the twist and turns before I can give a suggestion.

You know I love this series but I have to ask, what made you change the narrative from 1st to 3rd person? I really enjoyed reading from young Bobby's point of view. I also want to compliment you on the twist and turns off your stories. Everytime I was about to suggest something I would wait a chapter and you would have already made it, lol. Good job. I understand that the story has to end eventually but if you keep writing please consider going back to a 1st person narrative. It would also be interesting to read a 1st person narrative from the subs point of view, especially Blix! As a black Dom I love the way you wrote him in and introduced him to your readers, all the way down to his speech patterns and I would really be interested in a story from his point of view. I personally think you introduced him to the story perfectly and I like how you folded his back story, in a way that makes his interest in possibly submitting to Bobby and joining his family, so that it makes since for Blix to even consider this lifestyle. Can't wait to read more.

There is no real significance. It was a brain fart, simply a mistake on my part. I had taken a break from writing for a while. And when I came back to the story, I started outlining what would happen to the characters in the third person. That outline just expanded into several chapters, and before I realized it, I had submitted a couple chapters with an altered perspective. Personally, I like the Firat Peron perspective more. So, I've returned to that.

I'm glad you like the character of Blix Johnson. He is a bit larger than life, but most of the characters in this story are. I'm trying to keep Blix smart, funny and surprising. The mental image of a large black man fucking a beautiful pint-sized woman is exciting for me. Then, to turn around and have that little person dominate the larger, physically more powerful man is also in it's way exciting. But I just don't want Blix to read as stereotypical, or racist.

I know I've mentioned it to you before, but I LOVE the Granny Adele episodes!! I think it would be quite hot if you wrote a story or two about her...but that's just the admirer of your writing dying for more lol! Thx for all your lurid and kinky stories!!