All Comments on 'The Blue Life Ch. 35: On the Stairs'

When I first found this story I thought mint a good one for me to get my rocks of to it but now that's not the case (i still do get my rocks of to it ) now I actually enjoy reading this for the read or the story anyway grant I have to say you are one hell of a story writer can't wait for the next chapter hop it's soon

Yours Harry

I'm trying hard to present a different kind of story, but one that is still exciting and fun to read.

The only thing I see that has changed in the last 2 stories is the point of view from which it is told. Most of stories till now has been told by Robert. It is still a great series and I still look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

David

I don't know WHY I change the POV in the story to Third Person! Just a really stupid mistake! Thanks for catching that, David. I took a break from writing "The Blue Life" for several months, and when I came back, I just started writing in Third Person without thinking. I will fix that for the next chapter (back to First Person), because I like that better too.