All Comments on 'The Bluebird and the Sparrow'

Fuck this is long but every sentence is enthrallingly erotic ,,, cont ;) please

It was smoking hot until the end with the coach. The coach was a predator and blackmailer. People like that are not contrite and won't get "better" with a good spanking. I hope you lose the coach in future chapters.

I also feel bad for Anne Marie's husband as he doesn't sound like a bad guy. No hinting about cheating on his part (unlike his wife). Maybe the girls can include him in their games and train him to be a better lover.

Wonderful to see a family that knows guys are not a requirement and enjoying lesbian love is special. The start of the perfect family, with one guy left.. looking to the next chapter.

I agree it was very long but still so much to cover, it could have still Ben great and even longer. If you need any constructive criticism it would be that there should be more conversation before sex during sex and after sex.

Keep it going!

I found this surprising enjoyable.

B average and a scholarship to stanford? For PE? Silly story.

cheating cunts how can people get of on this?