All Comments on 'The Boat'

It's so refreshing to read an erotic story without all the banging and screaming. Very well written, descriptive and sensitive. Nice job.

I agree, it's quiet, smooth and good. very well done.

Very nice atmosphere in this piece. Good luck in the contest.

such a nice build with all the right words. You could feel the passion sweep over the characters so realistically. This story had a lot of feeling to it. Nice writing. Thank you