All Comments on 'The Boiler Room Ch. 01'

Very interesting concept and quite an erotic build up. I'm eager to see more sex and I'm curious whether this is taking place on a spaceship or a seaship.

Really enjoyed the build up in the story, now just cant wait for the next chapter!!

I actually enjoy the context of writing, it adds to the feeling of around the 1920's even though obviously with the guns its in another world & a different time, looking forward to reading the second episode, keep it up