All Comments on 'The Bond'

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Keep it up that a good start. hope your story gets longer as you go

Awesome story, love the way you write!

Best of luck writing in the future :)

I'm hoping that with the help of good critical feedback I can improve on the way I tell my stories. There's this whole world that I just can't wait to share, but I want to make sure that I'm doing it right.

Your set up is very interesting with abundant mystery and questions to be answered. The three distinct points of view on an obvious collision course are a good hook. 5*

(If you had technical errors, they weren't glaring enough for me to take notice, and I'm good at noticing. Good story telling always trumps editing anyway)

Thank you for taking the time to provide some constructive feedback.

It's unique, very well writen, erotic and simply amazing. I especially like the refreshing backround of your story. Hope the next chapter is longer.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Thank you for all the encouraging comments, mails and personal messages. I will try and produce longer chapters, however I cannot compromise my narrative for size.

Please keep reading.

Know that none of us wants you to comprise a good story for shear volume. The begging, whining, bitching and moaning for more just means we love it. We be powerful greedy creatures! You have us at your mercy, so enjoy. Whenever you get a begging/bitching for more just prop your feet up, sip your beverage of choice and chortle at the power you hold.

I really like the start of this story. You have peaked my interest. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

Fantastic read. I am glad I have read all your submissions till date and a pity that I don't have anymore from you to read.

Great erotic narrative...wish to read more..

Love your writing style and the story is well-written. I just wonder what Neytri looks like...

smart, sexy, to the point, interesting, I like your writing style and obvious love of the erotic.