by Poorimpulsecontrol
I liked the way you set out the doctrine, I have often wondered how one would do so.
Enjoyed the story a 5.
my opinion is this is too long and was basically the same thing over and over it got boring so I gave it a 3 star
Thought this was real religious satire but it's not funny, just boring. I wish they would put the comments at the front so I could warn people away from dreck like this. And oh yeah, it's also clumsily written. Other than that, have a nice day.