All Comments on 'The Book of Ruth: Doing Ruth Pt. 01'

Part 2 of this episode WILL appear -- it's about 1/2-written now. Let's see, there's the wedding, the funeral, the interrogations, the estrangement, the new lives, the friendly rape, and... I don't know yet what happens after the paranoia and the cheating. The characters are still writing the story. I just transcribe and edit. ;) But there may yet be a final sequel, and a prequel. Stay tuned!

I'll save my vote for after it's finished, but it seems like a real good read to this point.

Pt.02 is done... but the story grew, and I'm working on pt.03 now. I probably won't finish for a couple weeks. Stay tuned. Be patient. (Be especially patient for the planned prequel and sequel to The Book of Ruth saga.)

... your stories are to intelligent and detail oriented to let this one item slide. If British Military Intelligence sends agents to the US investigating Russians, those agents would be with MI6. Section 5 is domestic, Section 6 is foreign.

Other than that, it's a fun little read. Keep up the good work.

In ONE BLADE OF GRASS a reader dinged me because the featured skank called a Marine 'soldier'. I'll use my same defense here: It was not *I* the author who made the misstatement, but the character. Those players just don't know enough. Randy, the dumb Yank, doesn't know the dif between MI5 and MI6. It's all his fault!

but I would too if the women I bottom out to were Jill's standard. I don't know about Ruth. She's high maintenance in heels. So sorry it was Katia's time to go. But with kids in the oven maybe it was time to thin the herd. Solid chapter. Full marks. *****