All Comments on 'The Bookstore Ch. 08'

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Very nice indeed.

And I am quite sure we will all enjoy her tuition, lovingly and oh-so-sexily described - in fine detail, please! I love this story - thank you for writing it and sharing it with us - full marks yet again!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
That was it?

That was the discussion? This chapter smacks of 'magical cock syndrome.' At the beginning I thought we would be treated to a skilled dom. I'm thinking less of him as chapters go by and I find that disappointing.

bythewxbythewxabout 11 years ago
Seconded

I share the feelings of anon. bellow. This is definitely better than part 7 though...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very well written

This whole series is very beautiful , exciting and well written. I would like a Master who is like this owner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

the last fucking punishment was really hot her licking of his shoes the bathroom bj and eating like a dog it was so hot

although i dont understand his obsession with constantly hurting her nipples too brutally it seems as if he hates her nipples

he almost never sucks or licks them never appreciates her tits

he either slaps her tits or pinch or pull her nipples too hard or would put the most painful nipple clamps he couls think of for too longer duration and then pull them toooooo hard yeah i dont know how come she is still alive w/o a tumor or two in her breast

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