All Comments on 'The Borderline Ch. 02'

I love a good love story the build up was great I am not sure I read the 1st part but that's fine I really liked the way her mum point out that we all change when we get older which is true and I am glad she finally saw that in all not a bad story

I went back to read chapter one to refamiliarize myself with this story. I loved chapter one and I loved this chapter as well. I love stories where people start off as friends and gradually evolves into love. I myself rekindled an old flame with a lovely girlfriend I had back in the mid nineties. Circumstances tore us apart but we ended up getting back in touch with each other and life has been beautiful again for the past three years. Thank you for sharing this wonderful little series. Well deserved five stars.

Sometimes conventions work just the way they are supposed to. When the narrator ( I just realized that I did not recall seeing the name!) when the narrator walks back into the garden, my heart did the flutter and my eyes got misty, one knows what will happen and the happening is all the sweeter . . .

Thank you.

Think u tied it up pretty well.sequel?

Great sequel. Thanks.

Loved it all. Another great love story.

Great believable story.

I know there is no such thing as "Happily ever after", but this ending felt to much like every day life. I want to escape from that. I don't want just comfortable like her parents. Gave it 3 stars but should have only given one. But that's me.

As someone else said, a really great love story.

As normal you captured the emotions beautifully. Fantastic bit of work!

I know I've read this story before because I've left five stars on each chapter. For the life of me I can't think why I never left a comment. So here it is---better late than never (sorry about the cliche). The Borderline is another fine example of your ordinary folk in ordinary situations making out well, Shaima. I can't think of many other writers on this site who do 'ordinary' quite as well as you do. Long may you continue to do so.

They say love is better the second time around. I don’t expect that to happen in my life but Rachel and Holly reconnected for the better. I loved the story. I never would have dreamed I would find myself a fan of Lesbian Romances but I like nothing better. I guess I’ve turned into a soppy senior citizen. Shaima, I enjoy your stories as much as any others. I’m well into my second time around enjoying your stories. I’d say I hope you continue creating new works but I know Women Who Talk is answering that hope for me. Keep writing and I’ll keep reading. Thank you

Joy pure joy ...... Great Extension of part one ...... And again so much details sentences lines in this ...... Stunning ..... Thank you for such love storys

Love this story. A great r

Technology.

I wonder how many long distance relationships have survived and flourished over the last 20 years with its help. I was part of the great organization that created the ARPAnet, that became the NSFnet, and finally the Internet. And it never dawned on us the total opportunity for reinvention we were giving humanity. It was just our little tinker-toy tech project.

Now look at it.

And humans it's benefited.

Not the least of which is ... this very site.

OMG, it was a lovely reunion..

I loved that a lot.. Wish there were a sequel to this...

Cheers

Belinda