All Comments on 'The Borrowers' Club Ch. 02'

this could have been written differently AND better

This just gets sillier. The writing is okay but the story is just completely out of whack. No jealousy? Right. It's just a swinging group with a convenient background excuse. Still no explanation on what the women do or who they "borrow" why there a way for months on end. "Here, I'll take care of you at home while I bang my boss, the clients and anyone else." They get this amazing half hour sex at home and then go cold turkey why their away, right. And none of the guys have any questions.

Each chapter could be a little longer, with a little more plot and character development, but it is a great idea and a very good start.

We don't know anything about these people other than they work and swing? What is the deal with this company they work for? How is there no jealousy? If you don't address these questions and give no detail about their lives it just makes it sound like a silly kids stroker story! Food for thought!!!

First chapter held (some) promise - this one was poor.

Coulda been Group before, almost certainly should be this time. I prefer that all chapters in a serial be in the same category, but this series is clearly Group!

Kudos for the Spanish being much better than is commonly the case!