All Comments on 'The Boss Ch. 01'

Absolutely hot! you have to write a sequel for this! Good work

Please write a sequel... not only that it is highly erotic but you have good writing skills so it will be a shame to let this story unfinished. Ohh... and a lot of thanx. And sorry for my bad english...

But it takes tons of energy plus i dont speak good english. Something that pictures itself in my head for half a second takes 30 minutes and many words to explain in words :( . So anyway here is my story, japanese woman mai tries to escape being tied up and probed in ass and urethra and ends up tying herself more going throuh some shit involuntarily dialating more. Rest is up to your imagination :)

I'd really enjoy a second chapter, this was fun and sexy. I really enjoyed it, as I've enjoyed everything else you've written

The story is good, but an editor is needed to correct the grammar errors.

This is one of my favorite stories on this entire site it's honestly amazing

An erotic short story without any real intercourse, enjoyable!