All Comments on 'The Boss' Daughter'

but I. found oine part that seemed to be incorrect tense. Obviosly not so blatant that I founnd it becessary to make notes. Thank you,

Just a heads up, it appears my editing process leaves a lot to be desired for this story. I need to evaluate what I do to edit and try to fix this and future stories. Sorry if that ruins your enjoyment of the story.

Dude, your grammar made this shit hard to read

A tantalisingly tense, thrilling and enjoyable short story - it could even bear a second part.