All Comments on 'The Boss' Toy'

by michellephoenix275

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TediTedialmost 7 years ago

Great writing. I am really enjoying your story. Please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great Story

More please ☺

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue

I'm very curious to know how you'll develop it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
IRL?

This is quite possibly what was the beginning of the Donald Trump story.

Please write the correct ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Oh, god! This was so good! Loved everything about it. But I have to say, as someone who one of biggest turn offs is grammar and spelling errors, this was so good to read. It bugs me one I'm reading something that's full of errors. A few is fine, but if it's too much I can't get excited about it.

Enough with rambling. Please, continue! I need to know how their dynamic at work is going to be!

Amazing job! Hope you continue it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So good!!!

Please continue this series!!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

Exceptionally well done!

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