All Comments on 'The Boston Marathon'

by BoneHur7

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fine chapter one...

...looking forward to more. Two strangers joining together at the scene of an exciting event. Outdoors and public sex--hot. Imaginative. Realism with the subsequent doubts of the woman. What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Could use better English

Although the narrative is highly sexual, it seems improbable to me that he could penetrate her vagina from the rear in the standing position discussed in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Dress

While at the restaurant, is she wearing a turtleneck, a dress, or pants? All are mentioned.

Also, as was mentioned by a commenter, I find it doubtful Patrick could have fucked her in that position by holding her up - especially if she's that much shorter than he.

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