All Comments on 'The Bottle'

by charmscale

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SplitAcesSplitAcesalmost 9 years ago
Where was the love?

There is nothing here to like, unless you're a sociopath. If you want to entertain the rest of us, find a way for her to turn the table on her captor. Give her brains and heart so she gets her revenge or even better, finds true love. As it is, two stars.

I_Enjoy_Your_StoriesI_Enjoy_Your_Storiesalmost 9 years ago
Lovely!

This was well written. I enjoyed getting aroused by your description of him liking her. 5 stars.

I_Enjoy_Your_StoriesI_Enjoy_Your_Storiesalmost 9 years ago
made an error

*licking her, not liking her!

charmscalecharmscalealmost 9 years agoAuthor
to splitaces

You do realize that this is from the nonconsent/reluctance category, right? If you don't like this kind of story, don't read it. Seriously.

HungryrabbitHungryrabbitalmost 9 years ago
great story!

Well-written, I really hope there's more. And to Charmscale - ignore the first comment from Splitaces, I hate it when people are like "He raped her!" and it's like "You realise you're in the non consent section right? What did you expect...?"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Need more!

Loved it! Can't wait for what comes next!

SplitAcesSplitAcesalmost 9 years ago
I wasn't in non consent/reluctance

This was a recommended story as I enjoyed other genie stories in sci ft/fantasy. Believe me, I'll be more careful in future. You're all sick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
To split aces

If you don't like this kind of story don't damn well read it and who are you to say we are sick grow up it was a great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
To SplitAces

The girl lost count of her orgasms; she may not have liked it, but she sure loved it LOL

Seriously, if you can’t handle a story like this you better switch off and go watch the Disney channel…

zetagirlzetagirlalmost 9 years ago
Hopes

Thoroughly enjoyed the story.I hope you will continue it..

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
oh boy

I hope you continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow

Omg this story is amazing. How fun would it be if the genie had sex with her in front of someone else but the person cannot see him. So many different and awesome stories can be continued from this. Please do make this into a series 😁

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really enjoyable.

Congrats! Loved it!

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