All Comments on 'The Boy Across the Street'

by LadyOfDesirex

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Get an editor.

The story isn’t bad but your grammar is terrible. “Perky” 42DDs? I hardly think so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
roflmfao

made it to the useless fucking melons that would be hanging to her knees and said fuck this trash

Cant even be bothered to give it an ace

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good job

that was fucing sexy as hell.you should wtite another one when you do make it naughty ang rough

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