All Comments on 'The Boy At My Door... Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

wish i had met you when i was 18

funguy2223funguy2223over 12 years agoAuthor

I wish you had as well...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
jealous

Damn I wish I could be your slave. Im so jealous and yet horny everytime I read it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

i agree very hot but I would've liked more cum drinking

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hhmm

I still think this should be tagged under BDSM!! Not listed under Gay Male.

Really.

funguy2223funguy2223over 12 years agoAuthor
Re:Hhmm

Then your issue is with Literotica's tagging system, not my story. I recommend telling Literotica to add sub-categories to their search engine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

when i search "slave" in gay male this is what i want to read so thank you

jW0WjW0Wabout 12 years ago
good boi

Whats next for him

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice!

Nice plot but needs more details of things like when the friends came over & what they did and the noises he made.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I would like to read a version of this from the boys point of view with a bit more detail. A great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
fuckin i want to a dirty slutty slave like that please i would put my email for someone to contact me but im scarred im hard just to think of abuse like that to YESSSSSS

fuck me hard

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
i LOVE it

super super story Sir

garyrhendricks@gmail.com

funguy2223funguy2223about 11 years agoAuthor
This is a fantasy....

The stories written are complete fiction and have nothing to do with reality. It is agreed that no one should EVER do anything like what is described in these stories because it would be morally wrong. Also not a pedophile because in case you didn't notice the boy in the fantasy is eighteen which is the legal age of consent. Again this is a work of FICTION just like the action movies that show people killing each other. It's not real... duh

bluesky496bluesky496about 11 years ago

this is a fabulous story , i loved every word ,i want to be trained and used like that ,i was so hard reading this ,i must have more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I live in Michigan. Could I leave you my email? I would love for you to do this to me.

funguy2223funguy2223almost 11 years agoAuthor
Leave it.

leave your email as a comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I messaged it to you

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hmm

in the first chapter it was quite fun,

there is no second chapter (some mistake, copy of first chapter is named as second)

and third chapter make me fell realy bad,

it is horrible, no on deserve for something like that,

live is not only a sex,

he destroy him,

he kill him,

it make me feel sick :/

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

very sad ending, over the line....lost my wood.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
should have continued the story

I'm 18 as well and this gets me rock hard I wanna be a sex slave/toy I want this to happen to me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I loved it

I would love to read more very good story all three chapters

zazrix9zazrix9about 4 years ago
Wish I

could still pitch, so I could have both roles. Now I'll need to be satisfied only with the joy, and pleasure of the bottom/sub, butt sure wish I could switch

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fuxk

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