All Comments on 'The Boyfriend'

Bogged down, and saddled with children a young mother turns to the Internet seeking some fun out of life. She finds it and most of this story involves how she navigates through different problems to achieve her erotic goals. An interesting read.

Really like the tone of this story... great characters! Will there be more?

This story is over as it stands. A number of people have said they were expecting more chapters but I think then it just runs into the obvious. The seduction is the story. End of story. Thanks for your kind comments. I do hope to reuse the STAN character.

I have to admit, I haven't commented on a story on Lit before, because I haven't been compelled to. To all things there must be an end, apparently. I don't think you should add a thing to the story. You are absolutely correct in stating that the seduction is the story and the rest is obvious. I don't think I've...wait...I know I haven't come across a more clever tale.