All Comments on 'The Bracelet Ch. 03'

At least post this trash correctly.

Very enjoyable read. different approach. Looking forward to more!!

Thanks to everyone with constructive feedback.

And for the anonymous asshole who keeps posting that this is in the wrong category, let me explain. This is a serialized story, published in chapters. It is posted in loving wives because that is the overall theme I am working within.

I know it's difficult for you premature ejaculaters to follow a story longer than three paragraphs without coming all over yourself and losing interest. I suggest you go back to comic books if you don't have the intellect and patience to follow something longer than a pamphlet.

The Author.

5 stars for the build up, for those who don't like stop reading and go else ware.

Keep the story moving, I'm hooked.