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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Wow

0-60 in three seconds flat. Nothing like breaking your new sub in gently lol. She one freaky bitch.. My only disquiet with the story is that she has taken a very troubled girl who has obviously been traumatised and without knowing the cause piled in there big time. Melody should be running for the hills.

Well written but please stop calling her a dome. She's a domme. That was quite distracting.

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"Change what you can. Accept what you can't."

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