All Comments on 'The Brand Ch. 05'

I'm not sure WHAT that was but I wasted a couple of minutes reading it.

What this is is a gem of a story. Interesting characters. Smart women, with history. One moving to protect her new love. The other moving to adopt and adapt to a new, welcome lifestyle. Just two girls falling in love. Why do the haters have to hurl insults?

Keep them together. Write longer chapters. Take us along on the rollercoaster of their affair/courtship, but please for the sake of my heart, keep them together.