All Comments on 'The Brand Ch. 14'

This has turned into a complete mess. I give up. You need a really good editor to shave this disaster down to about 5 or 6 chapters. No stars as this was just awful.

There is good in the worst of us and evil in the best. Because a story didn't end the way we would have hoped, doesn't make it a bad story. A slice of life that isn't very palatible is sometimes needed to remind us that the fantasies we have grown accustomed to reading on this site are just that fantasies. Thank you for a wake up call.