All Comments on 'The Brandee Situation'

So good and believable, in suspense for part 2

well written, but needs editing.

Pretty good so far.

Little editing needed, like Filipino not Philippine.

This is not an incest story .You do have a very good story going and I thank you for it ,for a first timer you did great . Hope to see more of your work soon . Great job keep writing .

...and I love it. Don't stop, you've got a great beginning.

This was my first story, so I appreciate feedback, even constructive criticism. It only helps you better yourself. Part 2 has been submitted, and I'm currently working on part 3. I definitely need to work on my tags if anyone has any suggestions?

It's not incest or even taboo really. Just a dude cheating on his wife with a hot neighbor. This should probably be under Erotic Couplings.

See I incest. Just the usual cheating husband either a teenager.

Good story and we need to see more! He must fuck her again and again - PLEASE get her pregnant! Fuck the wife and get her pregnant too! Wife and mistress pregnant together. Mistress parents kick her out for being pregnant she moves in with her baby daddy and the three of them have a poly arrangement - he gets to fuck them both for years! More babies!

What is it with these guys that want everyone to get pregnant in every story? Rofl. I'm surprised Sam down there didn't suggest he knock up the neighbors wife too, and that he got all three of them pregnant while he was wearing a pregnant suit himself, lol. (Rolling eyes)

I've made the necessary changes to re-category the story. It's been submitted; hopefully it'll be soon. The reason I put it in this category wasn't because it was straight up incest, (close) but because I felt it was a little taboo. But since most of the feedback has been about the category, I am trying to get it fixed. Again, I totally appreciate positive and constructive feedback

I can't wait for parts 2 & 3!!!

I love your story and your descriptors. I wanted to walk in the pool house and join you. While it may not be incest, it is definitely TABOO. Basically like an uncle taking what he wants from this girl that has grown up in front of him. Great story. Excited to see what "cums" next. Lol

They are less severe on wandering husbands than wandering wives, but as Freethoughts said, taking advantage of your neighbours' daughter is decidedly taboo. It may be many married men's fantasy, but the Moral Brigade would be very unimpressed.

And I learned a new word today. It's always difficult to find new ways of describing dialogue -- he said, she replied, etc. Freethoughts reached new heights with "Well come on then little Brandee" I snided,

Well done: 'snide' used as a verb. Very creative.

Lue

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hope they get to fuck later.

Hope you can get another chapter soon.

Excellent writing.

Thank you guys for the love. I have submitted part 2 and 3, just waiting for approval. I've also submitted a couple more sexy short stories I hope y'all will enjoy. This has become a great hobby; such a fun way to blow off steam.

Just letting ya'll know, part 2 is posted. It's under erotic couplings, since so many people seemed annoyed by my choice of of posting it under taboo last time. I hope you all enjoy

It’s so hot that he cheated on his wife with the hotter better younger girl. I’d like to be ballsy enough to corrupt a married men with my pussy but I always back out. Maybe I’m a cock tease. Maybe I’m a scared little thing. I would have liked to have had him compare her hot body to his wife’s boring one and really emphasised that he was married.