All Comments on 'The Brat Ch. 03'

nice repost of Ch-2 with an added 1/2 page :(

It's a little of the end of chapter 1, all of chapter 2, and about 1/2 a page of new stuff.

Why did you bother reposting the earlier chapters, with barely a half page of new material? A one or two paragraph summary could have refreshed the reader's memory of the earlier story, and you could have continued with the trio when the mother realizes her daughter's shared lust.

Apologies for the double post. As you can see, I submitted the original two parts some time ago and have only just started to continue writing. Once again, apologies for the error...

Sorry dude... this is SUCH a let down...

May I suggest... Cut and Paste ALL of Chaper 1, all the Pages... onto a "New piece of Paper..."

Then do exactly the same to Chapter 2, all the pages... with no breaks... same new Doc...

Then find the "new bit" of Chapter 3... and add it to the rest.

You should then have the entire document... on "one multple page"... yes ?

Then... start writting again... continuing "Chapter 3"... except it wouldnt be... as there are no breaks and no chapters... just one big block of text...

You have basically not even really STARTED "Chapter 3"...

The story is just... hanging... unfinished...

You need to carry on... and finish the story...

As it is... it just... stops... like hitting a brick wall...

Sort it out ?!

that you ran part of pt 1, all of 2, and had 1/2 of a page on new script, to call pt 3... and it was such a great story too! Much better to see how M/f/f would've worked out, and then yes, maybe even bringing in Katy