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All Comments on 'The Bride Goes Missing'

by Cromagnonman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I'm sorry, this is romantic as watching cats mate

It really lacked finesse and the plot was unbelievable. The grammar was fine, so was the spelling but .. perhaps stick to one-nighters in erotic couplings rather than romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sweet story

it was a really sweet story .. im a sucker for romance =)

Yuri5Yuri5over 11 years ago
One of your better stories

I read quite a lot of them in the past day or so, and while many are good, some get too repetitive in style. This was the first most refreshing story I've read since I first finished reading a story of yours. Please, do keep writing like this!

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

Okay…. Is anyone else picturing Cary Elwes as Roderick?

Great story!!

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